1 thought on “Bar Top Battle by Rival’s Rapture

  1. kingofdapirates1 says:

    Wow, I just finished this and am blown away. What a welcome back story in regards to writing! I have so many comments, but will try and keep the small here (And post a lot more on the discord). Firstly the build up; spicy, and that doesn’t even include the prequels. Brie and Kylie’s taunting and demands really fit and watching Brie’s walls come down as she evolved into a bit of a…queen? That’s the best word I can think of. Was really fun.

    I honestly didn’t know who I wanted to win. I guess with the quitting the bar vs the slave, I was pulling for Brie, but I couldn’t help cheer for Kylie too. That blonde is going to have some intense but sexy slave time with those two roommates, but maybe it will be good for her (Someway? hahaha) New shower battle?

    Ok, and FINALLY the fight itself was so good. I enjoyed the equality and the nipple sucking was a great way for one to slowly take the lead. The emotions the girl’s felt you described makes it almost overwhelming, but really only adds to it. Plus it was HOT. What else do you need? Overall, great story. I’m surprised by the TBC but I guess we will see! Thank you for posting it!

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